As part of the Literacy learning process, Mrs She's children over many years wrote stories and then drew pictures to illustrate their stories. This story writing was integrated with childrens' Inquiries. Children also recorded their stories in movies so that they could share them with the world. We are proud of this work.
Room 7 were learning about the mighty mariners and had read and listened to books about the brave explorers such as Captain James Cook. Here is what Lorenzo had written in his story.
Well done Son, good to know you are learning and looking at Mrs She's comment...you are doing well and Im soooo proud of you. Keep up the good work and we will work on your capital letters, full stops and writing longer stories during the school holidays :)
Hi Lorenzo! My name is Leah Davis and I was told that I should look at your great videos! I am a college student at the University of South Alabama and I am in a technology class referred to as EDM310. I really enjoyed your story on Captain Cook! I've always heard about him but I never actually knew much about what he did. I am glad I got to look at your story because I defintely know more about him now! Thank you for sharing! I look forward to hearing from you more. To check out my blog you can go to http://davisleahedm310.blogspot.com/
5 comments:
Hi Lorenzo,
That was an excellent story! Do you know that you are getting better and better everyday ? I am so proud of you!
Mrs She
Well done Son, good to know you are learning and looking at Mrs She's comment...you are doing well and Im soooo proud of you. Keep up the good work and we will work on your capital letters, full stops and writing longer stories during the school holidays :)
Thanks Mrs She.
Hi Lorenzo! My name is Leah Davis and I was told that I should look at your great videos! I am a college student at the University of South Alabama and I am in a technology class referred to as EDM310. I really enjoyed your story on Captain Cook! I've always heard about him but I never actually knew much about what he did. I am glad I got to look at your story because I defintely know more about him now! Thank you for sharing! I look forward to hearing from you more. To check out my blog you can go to http://davisleahedm310.blogspot.com/
Hi Lorenzo,
I like your story because you used interesting words to describe Captain James Cook. I wish I can write like you!
Kahui.
Hi Lorenzo
I LIke your story because you had a good Captain Cook picture in your story. Next time I want to do that too!
from your best friend,
Cyrus.
Post a Comment